I have no regrets in my life, only lessons...
ok this was mesmerizingI LIKE !!
:| .. ok where did that come from? :)
@Ubi Thank you!@Ahmer :) It came from ... my mind...or maybe heart...during the Forensics lecture :D
@komal: hehe i think heart's guilty. :p, some what mind is her partner in crime.. :P
Na! My heart isn't guilty for anything and brain is stuffed with so much formulas, equations, definitions, theories and blah bleh bluh that there is no space for guilt! :D
lol :)
It was all going very well till the line "She mesmerized the moment" .. It broke the flow. Cardinal mistake of poetry, if there is a flow don't break it..Other wise it was Great ... :)
@Som Thanks for the advice. I will consider it next time :)
i like it!
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ok this was mesmerizing
I LIKE !!
:| .. ok where did that come from? :)
@Ubi Thank you!
@Ahmer :) It came from ... my mind...or maybe heart...during the Forensics lecture :D
@komal: hehe i think heart's guilty. :p, some what mind is her partner in crime.. :P
Na! My heart isn't guilty for anything and brain is stuffed with so much formulas, equations, definitions, theories and blah bleh bluh that there is no space for guilt! :D
lol :)
It was all going very well till the line "She mesmerized the moment" .. It broke the flow.
Cardinal mistake of poetry, if there is a flow don't break it..
Other wise it was Great ... :)
@Som Thanks for the advice. I will consider it next time :)
i like it!
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